Tuesday, 21 January 2014

Little did she know

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He meant the world to her. Ever since she could remember, he tended to her every need, just as he did with the other cows. Some of them went missing now and then; she thought they must have gone astray or wandered off. Little did she know she was growing up in a butcher’s backyard.

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It was her birthday, but no one seemed to remember. At the end of a long day, she dragged herself home, upset with the world for not making her day special. Little did she know her friends and family waited with bated breath in the darkness of her house to throw her a big surprise!


55 on Friday #WriteTribe


This post has been written for Write Tribe’s 55 on Friday for the prompt “Little did she know”
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20 comments:

  1. Nabanita21 January 2014 at 13:22

    I love the first one more I guess...! :) but both are gr8

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    1. Unknown21 January 2014 at 23:05

      Yeah, the second one is kind of predictable, isn't it?

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  2. simple girl.....21 January 2014 at 14:06

    oh wow!! .. great take on the prompt .. both the write ups.. loved reading .. :)

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    1. Unknown21 January 2014 at 23:06

      Thanks for dropping by and your encouragement :)

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  3. Anonymous21 January 2014 at 14:58

    Those are really good 55ers...I liked how you made one a bit dark and the other positive... :)

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    1. Unknown21 January 2014 at 23:07

      I wanted to bring the contrast in. Glad you liked it. Thank you for visiting my blog :)

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  4. Seeta21 January 2014 at 15:08

    Good ones! Esp, liked the first one.. sure was a twist :)

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    1. Unknown21 January 2014 at 23:10

      Thank you Seeta! Wanted to try a non - human protagonist. :)

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  5. Aayesha S Hakim21 January 2014 at 20:08

    who doesn't love such surprises! :)

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    1. Unknown21 January 2014 at 23:10

      Absolutely! Thanks for taking time out to read and comment. :)

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  6. Thoughtless21 January 2014 at 22:03

    Lovely stories there..

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  7. Unknown21 January 2014 at 23:59

    The first story was brilliant! The ending was totally unexpected.

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  8. Rat22 January 2014 at 08:59

    like the first one.. nice :)

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    1. Unknown22 January 2014 at 12:41

      Nandri. :) Second one is pretty run of the mill isn't it?

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  9. Diptee22 January 2014 at 10:30

    Very good 55s. I loved the contrast in both the tales.

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  10. Karan Shah22 January 2014 at 16:04

    the first one I loved more...very thought provoking :)

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  11. Unknown23 January 2014 at 07:35

    Both of them are completely awesome. The first one was my favorite! ♥

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